Broken Places

A week ago I wrote a response to Beslan’s recent tragedy. Since then, my reading and reflecting has taken me to other broken places - within myself, within the earth, within other people. Like this week, broken places often leave me quiet.

Poet Jean Janzen writes a poem by this same name - Broken Places - that evokes images I find nourishing at the end of a week like this. The power and gentleness of personified mountains, holding us, baptizing us in their own broken crags: my mind turns to god.

Here is the poem:

We know that the mountains
can’t heal us, even as they stand
beside us, serene after their own
great upheaval. And from the deep,

the hidden springs rise.
“For my irregular heart,” my father
said, soaking in the sulpherous pool,
the rain sizzling around him.

On the other side of the world
Mitsuko and I strip and scrub,
then enter the tranquil heat.
Like sisters, no need to speak,

for the water has claimed us,
holding us above the rush
of the river. All of us shipwrecked,
clutching what we can,

no cure except the final one.
But here, for awhile, our bodies release
the secret aches. Holding nothing
but water in our arms, we lean

against the split and tumbled sides
of rocks, here where the mountain’s heart
spills out, holding us in its own
broken place, the mists rising.


2 Responses to “Broken Places”

  1. Chris Erdman says:

    K…great hope and beauty in not only the poem but your introduction to it. Thank you. And, hey, you’re getting quite good at this blog design stuff. How’d you do the side bars?

  2. Kristin says:

    Chris, do you mean the dark ones on both sides of the page? Those are written into the typepad templates; to make yours show up, go to “edit design,” then to “style,” then to “general page settings” and choose a different background color than white. This site (http://www.december.com/html/spec/color.html) has a nice selection of color codes to choose from. Or are you asking about the contents of the yellow sidebar? Some of what I did there took the pro level of typepad that I don’t think you’ve subscribed to. Or have you now?

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